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Discussion in 'General Chat' started by Altree94, Nov 30, 2006.



    Altree94 VIP Member

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    Since zaac was having a problem downsizing and posting pics, I have done the picture part for him. Hopefully now, a poem about this little sweetheart will follow!

    zaac's poem has arrived! (and a beautiful haiku it is, too)!



    my heart and soul lie
    behind mischief laughing deep within your smile
    warming my world for eternity

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    Posted By Altree94 | Nov 30, 2006
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    Goodness...what a beautiful little girl!!!!! I love that red hair. She is a beauty and I hope to see a poem beautiful enough to go with her...that will be hard to do...absolutely stunning little girl. I know you are proud of her.


    Posted By Benny | Nov 30, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Oh she is a little cutie with red hair ;)
    Please post the poem though soon or the thread gets deleted.

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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 30, 2006
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    Hey, zaac...she's a cute one. Get that poem in here!

    Just to keep in topic of poetry...here's a poem inspired by one of my young'uns.

    I smiled today

    It has been so long since I have smiled
    It seems it has been forever and a day
    The mask I wear has a phony smile
    But I had a genuine smile today.

    The smile came through the telephone
    She called needing to talk to me
    I didn't know that I needed to hear
    I needed that so desperately.

    The telephone handset distorted her voice
    But still her love came thundering through
    The smile I had today is three years old
    And she said ‘Daddy, I love you’


    Posted By Amzy | Dec 5, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Oh - how beautiful a poem AMZY
    Thanx for sharing - But WHERE'S ZAACs poem???

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 5, 2006
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    Zaac's Poem has arrived of his sweet lil one!!!.....I got it though in a PM......and posted before he did...hope that is ok :blush:

    my heart and soul lie
    behind mischief laughing deep within your smile
    warming my world for eternity

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    TY PD! I put zaac's poem up with the pic. Can we get this thread moved back into the Creative/Traditional forum now?


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 11, 2006
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