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    sagesweetwater Lesbian Novelist

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    Sage Sweetwater bringing you the upper tier in lesbian erotica...

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    down on my knees
    in the mud in your garden
    with my rural almanac, zodiacal
    woman can be found here, I'm digging
    for the potato's eye of wisdom, tears stream
    down my face, you fling the canvas tarp with
    fire in your thighs,

    I cry, going beyond imagination,
    Plato's elements, earth, fire, water,
    air, I want you, fucking insanity,

    alchemical, astral, hermetic
    channeling, you're howing the
    rows, the rain coming down in
    monkish Black Letter Gothic script,

    pseudoscience of astronomy,
    sun and moon resembles human
    temperaments, signs of the zodiac
    have a mystical hold of us,

    I dig up invocations
    from Saturn and Jupiter, I
    don't know how the images
    were engraved on onyx and
    turquoise gems, pagan goddess
    appears in sexual lapidary,

    your soul in search,
    shocked, you've channeled
    fire, your hoe sparks, whetstone
    explodes into space, total lunar
    eclipse tonight turns shades of amber
    and crimson, Earth passes between the
    sun and moon,

    down on my knees
    in the mud in your garden
    with my rural almanac, zodiacal
    woman can be found here, I crouch
    between your thighs on the canvas tarp,
    I cry, going beyond imagination, Plato's
    elements, earth, fire, water, air, -

    I...


    Copyright 2007 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    hello Sage the way this flows with imagery is fantastic,
    a very serene, surreal fantasy,
    you show off your poetical skills,
    its very connected to everything
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Ms Sage,

    :wow::wow: I don't even know what to say. I am speechless, with your poetry as usual. The story, the feelings, the captivity, the imagery, the word play, the mysticism, the Ms Sage signature. I could not even quote my favorite verse. Am so glad, you came back to post, simply AWESOME!!!!!! Love Ya'!!!!

    {{{~~**PAINTED**~~}}}:giftrose:

    P.S. Remember the girl in the painting with the feather? lol

    sagesweetwater Lesbian Novelist

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    Thanks Erik and Painted! Happy Spring to you both. The inspiration for this poem is from a woman of Intelligence, and the lunar eclipse a few weeks back. Everything is tied to nature and astral activity...the best part is wallowing in uncensored mud! Yea, Painted, I remember the girl in the painting with a feather....soft, downy....OH...be well, you two...Blessed Be.

    Warmly,

    Sage

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    Hi Sage,

    This write is moveing in
    all the right spots...

    it doesn't leave ya...
    unmuddied... or
    un... ex... cited.

    Thanks for your
    read. :yes4:


    Posted By Jeez | Mar 22, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    WHOA! - Don't know how I managed to miss you posting this MS SAGE - but this is just FANTASTIC piece of poeticing --- hardcore sensual ((and NO! it's not a contradiction in terminology LOL)) intensity is very abundant in this piece as well, unapoligetically so...

    The visual is just splender - but then you do manage to actually poet on the premise of Zodiac - with hints of the elements mingling, co-mingling and such...

    Actually this piece sort of reminds me of Dan Browns novels Demons & Angels - It's just fast paced and lovely:

    I usually enjoy your writing very much - so I wasn't surprised a bit to come across those lines above... I said WHOA!!!!!!!!! But the insanity is a bit lovely at times, no?

    Nice write Girl - Enjoyed this one very much ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 22, 2007
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