The Japanese
SENRYU has the same structure as a haiku, either three syllabic lines of 5-7-5 or 3-5-3. The difference between the two is that while a haiku is about nature and natural metaphor, the senryu is about the doings of humans. Where haiku are serious, senryu are considered to be comic, satirical, or parody.
Quote:
Schematic:
xxxxx
xxxxxxx
xxxxx
or
xxx
xxxxx
xxx
where "x" is the amount of syllables per line
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Example by
Charles L. Weatherford:
Caligula
Little feet
seldom seem serene
above me.
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Example 2 by
Jacquii Cooke:
Untitled
He's nappy.
Head of purple hair
defines naught.